Thanks so much for the fun challenge! I knew exactly what I wanted to do to tweak these two pages so that they flowed together better.
Original pages:
I put the title on the left page higher so it would be more of the focus, and changed it to a banner to match the other word art. Moved word art down on right page. made the staples holding the day strips smaller. Changed the font on the day strips and made it smaller. Changed the scale of a couple clusters so it matched the scale of the others better. Made the larger pic on the right page the same size as all of the others. Moved everything on the left page more toward the center to better match the right side. Double checked my journaling and found a few mistakes. Guess I didn't know how to spell Pavilion lol!!
A lot of little changes but I think it really made the two pages flow together much better.
